tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3798129571242557592.post526915529782622081..comments2023-10-17T03:57:52.371-05:00Comments on In the words of Tom: Some things need to remain deadTom Doolanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03451129317759266295noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3798129571242557592.post-37976252723429869752011-04-13T10:46:09.039-05:002011-04-13T10:46:09.039-05:00I wrote a western novel a long time ago that's...I wrote a western novel a long time ago that's like that. But I did use scenes from it in a couple of later stories, including those published in the Killing Trail ebook.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3798129571242557592.post-89327722373052280522011-04-12T21:47:27.185-05:002011-04-12T21:47:27.185-05:00Been thinking about your concern, mundane words su...Been thinking about your concern, mundane words such as "said" to indicate who is speaking.<br /><br />I was reading a story in the anthology, Realms of War, titled Continuum, by Paul S. Kemp.<br /><br />He uses "said" so sparsely I didn't notice it right away. Narration and motive lead into "dialogue." Because of this narrative style, the characters and plot flow simultaneously, without the "said" gap.<br /><br />If you can find the paperback in your area, I'd give it a quick read. Other stories are equally good reads. I thought that story might be helpful to you while crafting a story from another time, another place...K. Anthony Paganohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09905513967986990323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3798129571242557592.post-91424742544620117342011-04-12T13:13:07.574-05:002011-04-12T13:13:07.574-05:00Chris' advice is sagely, as usual.
When I hav...Chris' advice is sagely, as usual.<br /><br />When I have trouble crafting a story it's usually because I haven't created a protagonist's core value. In other words, why do I care about him or her, and why am I interested in writing about them.<br /><br />While I spend a great deal of time thinking about the individual, I sometimes forget to summarize this interest, and delve immediately into a situation, conversation, thought, which may not be the best course but the creator in me wants to create.<br /><br />That's a mistake.<br /><br />Pushing myself ahead of the characters and the plot is just ego-sailing...<br /><br />I'm sure the nectar of the story is still among the embers you're sifting through. A poker jab will stoke the fire once more.<br /><br />Again, why do YOU care about this orphan? Why do YOU care about the character's adoption among Orcs...<br /><br />Journal from that for a while and see what happens.<br /><br />Good luck.K. Anthony Paganohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09905513967986990323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3798129571242557592.post-68328321752118857232011-04-12T12:02:41.611-05:002011-04-12T12:02:41.611-05:00I have totally had that happen to me. A few years ...I have totally had that happen to me. A few years back, I wrote 60,000 words of a 80,000 word novel for NaNoWriMo. It had a great premisis, where fires were gateways to a demon home, and a special breed of knight called Fire Fighters would come to fight the demons. The story followed the daughter of a Fire Fighter after his death as she learns to use his staff and discovers who killed him and why. I took a long break from it after NaNo was done, and then when I came back, I realized that my writing had improved so much that I couldn't just finish it, I'd need to re-start it. And really, that was probably a good thing, because so much of the begining of it rambled, or was just badly written.<br /><br />But, let me say that starting over is not a bad thing. I've listened to many authors say that they will often sit down to a new project and just start typing away. They'll get as many as 10,000 or even 20,000 word before the story itself starts. Most of that is them discovering who the characters are and what those characters sound like. That's 20,000 words that get ditched as they try to find the story!<br /><br />So, take what you have and file it away, but don't be afraid to return to it. Dust off these scenes and consider them notes. Outline the story from what you did have, ditching what you didn't like and make sure to add what you did.<br /><br />Keep writing, Tom. I, myself, never consider a project truly dead. It's just in storage until I find it's proper place for it. Some day, I will come back to that Fire Fighter story. Will it be the same story? I have no idea. But I know that at the very least, ideas from it will come back in something else I'll write.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02835457803350119002noreply@blogger.com