Yesterday I had a six-hour class on the purchasing procedures for my job. Most of the information was not new to me, and what was new was provided in a detailed PowerPoint presentation that I can read at my leisure. Basically it was a mind-numbing experience. I was fully capable of learning what I needed to know while only half paying attention. So, what did I do with the other half of my brain? Why, I wrote, of course!
But, since I didn't have a computer in front of me, I had to change things up. I am a computer composer. I rarely pick up a pen or pencil for anything, preferring to brainstorm ideas and compose notes in MS Word. However, all I had in front of me was a notepad and a pen. And this proved to be plenty.
I have recently been interested in seeing if the "Clonan" I mentioned in my last blog post is truly dead. I am convinced that in commercial circles, it is. Publishers probably won't touch such simple, straight-forward action yarns anymore. And that's fine. They're in the business of making money, so they have to go with what sells. And let's face it, hulking barbarians in literature probably won't sell much these days. But, there's a relative handful of holdouts like me who sometimes prefer these simpler tales to the angst-ridden, verbose and detail-heavy fantasy tales of today. Don't get me wrong, I like those too. But sometimes I just want to crack open a short book filled with action, danger, and maybe a little sex, all brought to life through the exploits of a huge warrior who has the power to carve his destiny with the keen edge of a broadsword. And since it doesn't seem that I will get any of that beyond forays into used book stores, I thought I would produce some short novels of my own for the eBook market.
To that end, I took up my pen, and began to scribble notes about a character that I had recently envisioned. As I said, I usually do this on the computer. So it was with some amazement that I found details flowing from pen to paper. Admittedly, it was slow at first. I find that I rarely have to write anything by hand these days, so the muscles involved, which are different than the muscles involved in typing, were a little stiff. My penmanship looked like a ninth-graders. But, it's legible, and understandable. In the end I had two, hand-written pages consisting of notes about the character, his background, and a rough outline for his first book.
The whole experience reminded me of when I was about 14 years old. At the time, I was huge into Mack Bolan, and my friend and I would write stories about our own Men's Adventure characters (mine was Darryl Knox, as portrayed in my mind by Marc Singer). I still have the notebook that contains my efforts in that regard. Handwritten, with paragraphs and passages scratched out and re-written. It's an interesting way to write, to say the least.
This also illustrated a point that I have read from authors and writers a lot. That change will often be what is needed to get past a rut or writer's block. In this instance, a simple change in how I write seemed to provide a good creative spark.
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Thursday, May 26, 2011
Thursday, May 19, 2011
Learning my lessons
Last week I learned an important lesson for writers: Deadlines are good.
I worked feverishly to finish the story I was planning to submit for an anthology. I had a schedule in my head, and had given myself an entire work-week (five days) to complete it. Lo and behold, life interfered and two of those days were shot. However, in the past I would have said "Oh, well" and given up on it. But this time I was determined to sprint for the finish line. And amazingly, after a good chunk of writing (about 2,000 words in four hours) I did it! And even though the story was promptly rejected, it didn't matter. What mattered was that I set myself a deadline and stuck with it. This is a huge step for me.
The rejection was a blow, to be sure. I was really hoping to get accepted. The letter (email) was short and sweet. The editor stated that the story was "perfectly good" and encouraged me to submit it elsewhere. Now, my cynical side says "canned response." But my optimist side (which is stronger) says that it was an honest, albeit brief, assessment. And I am choosing to go with that. I know the story isn't perfect. It is a first draft, and I'm sure there are areas that could use improvement. So, I am going to step away from it, work on something else, and then go back and polish it up. Once that's done, I will begin the process of shopping it around. Or, I may set it aside and save it for the anthology eBook my friends are working on, since it takes place in that world.
So, taking that lesson, I am imposing a deadline for my Orc story of next Friday, 5/27. I was going to say tomorrow, but my daughter is coming home for the Summer after being away for almost a year. So, I may be a little too distracted to write coherently for a couple of days. However, I do plan to put some effort into the story today, during my downtime. And since it's already 2/3 done, I expect to come close.
Ok, deadlines are one lesson I have to learn. I know there are several others (outlining, "show don't tell", and working schedules come to mind). But I figure if I can get one lesson learned at a time, eventually it will all come together and I can live the dream.
I worked feverishly to finish the story I was planning to submit for an anthology. I had a schedule in my head, and had given myself an entire work-week (five days) to complete it. Lo and behold, life interfered and two of those days were shot. However, in the past I would have said "Oh, well" and given up on it. But this time I was determined to sprint for the finish line. And amazingly, after a good chunk of writing (about 2,000 words in four hours) I did it! And even though the story was promptly rejected, it didn't matter. What mattered was that I set myself a deadline and stuck with it. This is a huge step for me.
The rejection was a blow, to be sure. I was really hoping to get accepted. The letter (email) was short and sweet. The editor stated that the story was "perfectly good" and encouraged me to submit it elsewhere. Now, my cynical side says "canned response." But my optimist side (which is stronger) says that it was an honest, albeit brief, assessment. And I am choosing to go with that. I know the story isn't perfect. It is a first draft, and I'm sure there are areas that could use improvement. So, I am going to step away from it, work on something else, and then go back and polish it up. Once that's done, I will begin the process of shopping it around. Or, I may set it aside and save it for the anthology eBook my friends are working on, since it takes place in that world.
So, taking that lesson, I am imposing a deadline for my Orc story of next Friday, 5/27. I was going to say tomorrow, but my daughter is coming home for the Summer after being away for almost a year. So, I may be a little too distracted to write coherently for a couple of days. However, I do plan to put some effort into the story today, during my downtime. And since it's already 2/3 done, I expect to come close.
Ok, deadlines are one lesson I have to learn. I know there are several others (outlining, "show don't tell", and working schedules come to mind). But I figure if I can get one lesson learned at a time, eventually it will all come together and I can live the dream.
Thursday, December 9, 2010
How I Write
Scott Oden, bestselling author, and personal friend and mentor of mine [shameless brown-nosing], discussed his method of writing on his blog recently. His method is interesting and unique, but it works well for him, as evidenced by his excellent books [more brown-nosing, but it’s the truth]. He also encouraged others to share their methods for writing. I have decided to not clutter his blog with my own ramblings, but instead discuss how I write here. You know, when I actually do write.
The Idea
I usually just start with an idea. Whether that idea is a character, a situation, or even a setting, it generally starts the same. I simply open Word and begin writing. By the time I actually sit down to write something, the idea has often been germinating in my mind for some time, possibly months or even years. So, I have a general idea of where the thing is going in my head already.
Exploration
I tend to compose on the fly. I explore my idea through words. I start describing the idea in what feels the most logical manner, and just let the description flow from there. Character nuances and personalities develop as they are born on the page. If the character is one that I have been thinking of for a while, this part is much easier. Since I generally write science fiction and fantasy, I also explore the world, and build it as I go during this stage, adding details that further the story or develop the character(s) as I need them. This stage is usually a stream-of-consciousness endeavor.
Editing
I am a chronic self-editor. I know that conventional writer’s wisdom is to not edit as you compose, but I can’t seem to help myself. I correct spelling and grammar errors as soon as I see them (Damn you Word, with your squiggly, colored lines!!!), and will often re-write a sentence or paragraph several times before moving on. It’s a wonder the letters on my Backspace key are even visible anymore. This, combined with my lack of outlines, is probably my biggest enemy, and one of the main reasons that I have yet to finish anything longer than a couple of short stories. I have begun drafts for countless projects, only to be bogged down by the details and get derailed to the point of setting it aside indefinitely.
Does it work?
Well, that depends on your benchmark for success. If you measure success by completed projects, then my method is a dismal failure. But if you measure it by my enjoyment of writing, then I’d say it works fairly well. At this point in my life, I am not trying to earn money with writing. I am simply writing for my own enjoyment (and maybe a few friends who seem to think I have some talent). Again, conventional writer’s wisdom states that they are not mutually exclusive, and that one should exist with the other. But for me personally, the writing is just an adventure. I use it to explore ideas, develop characters and settings, and just entertain myself.
So there you go. The Tom Method of (not) Writing. Probably an abject lesson in “what not to do,” but there it is. What can I say? I’m no Robert E. Howard or Scott Oden or David Morrell. But I like to pretend that I am on the internet. That’s what this place is for, right?
The Idea
I usually just start with an idea. Whether that idea is a character, a situation, or even a setting, it generally starts the same. I simply open Word and begin writing. By the time I actually sit down to write something, the idea has often been germinating in my mind for some time, possibly months or even years. So, I have a general idea of where the thing is going in my head already.
Exploration
I tend to compose on the fly. I explore my idea through words. I start describing the idea in what feels the most logical manner, and just let the description flow from there. Character nuances and personalities develop as they are born on the page. If the character is one that I have been thinking of for a while, this part is much easier. Since I generally write science fiction and fantasy, I also explore the world, and build it as I go during this stage, adding details that further the story or develop the character(s) as I need them. This stage is usually a stream-of-consciousness endeavor.
Editing
I am a chronic self-editor. I know that conventional writer’s wisdom is to not edit as you compose, but I can’t seem to help myself. I correct spelling and grammar errors as soon as I see them (Damn you Word, with your squiggly, colored lines!!!), and will often re-write a sentence or paragraph several times before moving on. It’s a wonder the letters on my Backspace key are even visible anymore. This, combined with my lack of outlines, is probably my biggest enemy, and one of the main reasons that I have yet to finish anything longer than a couple of short stories. I have begun drafts for countless projects, only to be bogged down by the details and get derailed to the point of setting it aside indefinitely.
Does it work?
Well, that depends on your benchmark for success. If you measure success by completed projects, then my method is a dismal failure. But if you measure it by my enjoyment of writing, then I’d say it works fairly well. At this point in my life, I am not trying to earn money with writing. I am simply writing for my own enjoyment (and maybe a few friends who seem to think I have some talent). Again, conventional writer’s wisdom states that they are not mutually exclusive, and that one should exist with the other. But for me personally, the writing is just an adventure. I use it to explore ideas, develop characters and settings, and just entertain myself.
So there you go. The Tom Method of (not) Writing. Probably an abject lesson in “what not to do,” but there it is. What can I say? I’m no Robert E. Howard or Scott Oden or David Morrell. But I like to pretend that I am on the internet. That’s what this place is for, right?
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